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Something on my Back by ~-elly-:icon-elly-:



                        There's Something in the middle of my back.
                                                                                And I can't see it.


                                                        I'd ask the mirror,
                              
                                                   but that would make me crazy.


                                  
                                               I know there's something there.
                    Maybe
                            it's a Spider bite.
                             
                                                                              Maybe it's Cancer
                           Oh fuck,
                                     
                                                  Maybe I'm dying



                           Whatever it is, It's on my back.
                                                              
                                                                 And I can't see it.
©2007-2010 ~-elly-
:icon-elly-:

Author's Comments

Yeah. There's something there. **spacing edit. Needs to go slowish, IMO.

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:iconnifzeta:
That's awesome. I love the way that it describes the fears that we as humans create for ourselves... and doesn't actually solve anything.

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~Nifty~
:icon-elly-:
Thanks. I usually try to be more verbose but it doesn't really work here. Simplicity is awesome.

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